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media type="youtube" key="wH8oMw8izBg" height="315" width="420" Advertising a toyota hilux. I liked that it was funny. I think the colours could be different to make it stand out more. The different camera angles were: of the bulls in the front, far out showing the side, inside the truck pointing out andand of the bull out the window. They used these angles because they show everythiong clearly. The advertisment was one minute long. The colours that i remember are black and silver because that is the colour of the bulls and the car. The advertisment is aimed at farmers. The producer caught your attention with the talking animals, and it was effective.

media type="youtube" key="6tCtM8UEQv8" height="315" width="420" The product being advertised is Nolan's cheddar cheese. I liked how the songs changed for the different parts of the video. I think the time eating the cheese could be longer and it could be more obvious that he was sniffing the cheese. There was only one camera angle. I think they used these angles because the whole scene is in one spot and you can see everything clearly. The advertisment was one minute twenty-nine. The colour I remember the most is red because it is the colour of the package. The advertisment is aimed at cheese people. The guy drew your attention by having the mouse go to the mouse trap.

10 sentences
 * 1) Fluorescant paint is what we are using for the can pencil holders.
 * 2) Our group is made up of very intelligent people.
 * 3) Our group will be radient on market day.
 * 4) Our group will not be hesitant in decision making.
 * 5) Our group will be pleasant to our many customers.
 * 6) Our opponents are no match for us.
 * 7) To cut the fabric for our pencilcases we will need a measurement.
 * 8) Our subsequent groups will drop behind as we rack up the sales on market day.
 * 9) Our target market is people who are indulgent.
 * 10) Our speaking in front of the dragons den was eloquent.

Paragraph about our preparations for dragons den day

First we made prototypes of all our products, and wrote our speech at school so we wouldn't have to use computers at school, then Jonnie took it home and typed it up, we all went round to his house one weekend and made the powerpoint and put the speech on to cue cards. and then we practised our speech and timed it, and when we decided it was perfect we just waited with anticipation for monday.